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E-Writer
Issue #7
16 July 2004
http://www.nickdaws.co.uk
E-mail: ewriter-at-nickdaws.co.uk
"Hints, tips and tricks
for wired-up writers"

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>>> In This Issue <<<

1. Editorial: Writing Novelty Products
2. Article: Kwickee Update
3. Market Info: Miscellany
4. Style File: Descriptive v.Possessive Nouns


1. Editorial: Writing Novelty Products

Hello again. And thank you for being a valued subscriber to E-
Writer!

I had two unexpected parcels arrive in the mail this week. Both
were from publishers I have worked with over recent months. One
was from a greetings card company, and turned out to be a sample
of their new product, 'Bear in a Chair'. It was a little teddy
bear, sitting in a chair and apparently reading a mini-version
of an inspirational book I had written for the company some time
ago. Very cute! It now graces my partner's bedside table...

The other parcel contained six quiz books I wrote last year,
along with six accompanying devices called Quizmos. The latter
look like a cross between a calculator and a mobile phone - the
idea is that you enter your answer to each question and the
Quizmo tells you whether you are right or not, and works out
your score at the end. Watch out for them soon in a playground
near you!

I mention these things just to illustrate the fact that there
is a huge range of 'novelty' books and other items freelance
writers may be required for. Just a few similar projects I have
been involved with over the last few years include:

'Cyberbabe' and 'Cyberboyfriend' CD-ROMs
Office Magic Tricks Kit
Office Practical Jokes Kit
Children's quiz books
Humorous recipe books
'The Legend of Doom Island' adventure game
Casino Party Night Pack
'Fifty Ways to Fill an Awkward Silence' cards
'Fifty Ways to Embarrass your Kids and Family' cards
'Seduce your way around the world' humorous phrase book intro

Of course, I write books and articles as well, but I think that
any writer who fails to explore these markets is in danger of
missing a trick. These sort of products can be quick and fun to
write, there's less competition from other writers, and once you
are established with a company, you can expect a steady stream
of work from them. You're unlikely to get rich, as they normally
pay a fixed fee rather than royalties - but on the other hand,
payment will be guaranteed, and generally realistic if not
spectacular.

Finding out about opportunities isn't always easy, of course,
but here's a tip. In the next month or two the shops will start
filling with Christmas gifts, books, games and novelties (yes, I
know it's hard to believe...). Check out any which include any
significant amount of text and see who the publishers are - then
drop them a line offering your services. Send them one or two
samples of your work. If you don't have anything published in an
appropriate style, simply write something and include it with
your application. Who knows, with a little bit of luck you could
find yourself writing next year's Christmas novelty best-seller!


2. Article - Kwickee Update

Regular readers will know that I am a freelance Group Editor for
a new company which was originally called Kwickee Bitesize (more
about this in a moment!). They plan to supply articles, stories
and so on which people can download (for a fee) via their mobile
phone, PDA or the internet. The service will only be available
in the UK initially, but anyone is welcome to submit work, and
you will get a share of the fee each time it is downloaded. You
can read all about the company, if you haven't already, at
http://www.kwickee.com, http://www.kwickee.info or in any
previous E-Writer (http://www.nickdaws.co.uk/EWarchive.htm). 

Since the last issue there have been various developments to
report, and the first of these is a name change. For trademark
reasons the 'Bitesize' label has had to be dropped - so from now
on the company will simply be called Kwickee, and articles and
stories on the system will be called Kwickees rather than
Bitesizes. This shouldn't make much difference to contributors,
of course, but don't use the word Bitesize in your submissions
any more.

The other big news is that a definite launch date has now been
set. If you visit the Kwickee.com homepage you will see that a
countdown has begun, but to save you working it out I can reveal
that the Kwickee service will be launched to the general public
on 21 September 2004 at midday (BST). This date has been chosen
to coincide with a major telecommunications conference, and in
the mean time Kwickee will be developing and testing all their
systems to try to ensure that everything goes smoothly from the
launch date onwards.

One or two people have commented that it can be difficult to
contact Kwickee, so the company has introduced a 24-hour support
line. The number for UK callers is 0870 73 83238, and calls are
charged at 8p per min. There is also a form on the website you
can use to submit questions - just go to http://www.kwickee.com
and click on Contact at the top right of the screen. You can
select the department you want your query to be sent to (e.g.
Technical, Editorial) from a drop-down menu at the bottom of the
form.

Writers are always welcome to submit work to Kwickee, so if you
haven't already registered, go along to Kwickee.com and fill in
the online form. As I mentioned above, you don't have to be UK-
based to write for Kwickee, but non-UK residents will be paid by
Paypal, so you will need to sign up for a Paypal account at
http://www.paypal.com. I hope to bring you news about more
opportunities at Kwickee very shortly, including further
vacancies for freelance editors and specialist writers.


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3. Market Info - Miscellany

Here are a few more potential markets for you, starting with
a couple of transport-related items...

I mentioned 'Moving Stories' in E-Writer a couple of issues ago.
The original closing date for this web-based collection of poems
and stories about railway journeys was 30 June 2004, but the
site has been so popular (no doubt since its mention in E-
Writer!) that it is now to continue at least until the end of
2004. Writers are invited to submit poems or stories based on
their experience of rail travel and post them on the website
http://www.moving-stories.org.uk. Popular themes include first
encounter, leaving, off to war, a funny story, tragedy, and
coming home. Read other stories already on the site to gain
inspiration. There's no payment, I'm afraid, though if funding
is found the best contributions will be selected for a printed
anthology. Still, as I said in EW5, it's good practice at
stringing words together, and publication on the website at
least is guaranteed!

Now here's a paying market for travel-based stories. Window Seat
Press are seeking off-beat tales of international bus travel for
an anthology. They want off-beat, funny, inspirational or tragic
international bus travel stories of 750 to 4,000 words for a bus
travel story anthology. Payment is one $500 editor's choice per
book, plus $100 and two book copies for all other published
stories. The submission deadline is December 31 2004, with
publication scheduled for summer 2005. To submit, send your
story in the body of an email with the subject line, "Where Do
We Get Off?" to mailto:wheredowegetoff@windowseatpress.com or
send a self-addressed stamped envelope with each submission to:
Where Do We Get Off?, Window Seat Press, 1519 Connecticut
Avenue, NW, #301, Washington, DC 20036, USA. All submissions
must include the story title, along with the author's name,
address and phone number. For more information, visit
http://www.windowseatpress.com

There has been an open call for submissions for the popular
series, A Cup of Comfort. Each Cup of Comfort anthology features
50-60 soul-stirring true stories about the experiences and
relationships that comfort, inspire, and enrich our lives.
Written by people from all walks of life, these slice-of-life
stories are carefully selected for publication based on
originality, creativity, emotional impact, and substance.
Submissions are currently being sought for the following three
volumes: A Cup of Comfort for Love, A Cup of Comfort for Faith,
and a Cup of Comfort for Spirituality. Stories must be original,
positive, true, in English, and 1000-2000 words in length. There
are no entry or reading fees. There is one $500 grand prize per
book, with $100 for all other published stories. For full
guidelines, visit http://www.cupofcomfort.com (click on "Share
Your Story"), or e-mail cupofcomfort-at-adamsmedia.com, or
mail SASE to Cup of Comfort, Adams Media, 57 Littlefield Road,
Avon, Massachusetts, 02322, USA.

Is copywriting your thing? If so, UK distance learning college
The Writers Bureau (http://www.writersbureau.com) would like to
hear from you. They are looking for someone to create a course
for them on freelance copywriting skills. To apply, send your
full CV to Diana Nadin at diana-at-writersbureau.com. By the
way, in my days as a freelance tutor for The Writers Bureau I
worked regularly with Diana, so do say hello to her from me if
you decide to apply!

Aspiring crime writers still have time to apply for the Crime
Writers Association's Debut Dagger Award. Entrants are required
to produce a 500 word outline of their proposed crime novel,
together with its first 3,000 words. All sub-genres - cozy,
hard-boiled, historical, humorous, police procedural and private
eye - are welcome. The outright winner each year receives a £250
($400) cash prize, plus an accommodation package for two at a
London hotel. All previous winners of the Debut Dagger have
gained publishing contracts and are now on their way to becoming
successful crime writers. There is an entry fee of £10 per
submission, and entries from anywhere in the world are welcome.
For full info, see the website http://www.thecwa.co.uk (click on
Debut Dagger in the left-hand menu). The closing date for
entries is 1 September 2004.

Finally, are there any illustrators out there who might be
interested in collaborating on a children's book? My colleague
Roland Curtis (a professional freelance copywriter living in
Lichfield, Staffordshire, UK) is looking for someone with a
flair for characterisation to help him develop a series of
children's stories. The stories will be around 8,000 words
each; and with commendable honesty, Roland adds, "Naturally, the
money is likely to be abysmal. I need someone with a sense of
fun prepared to take a punt on this - it's a bit of an
adventure." If you're not deterred by this, drop Roland a line
at roly-at-rolyonekenobe.fsnet.co.uk.


4. Style File: Descriptive v. Possessive Nouns

In this feature I examine an aspect of English usage - words,
punctuation, grammar, and so on - which can cause problems for
writers. In this issue I'm highlighting a construction which
catches out even experienced writers.

Here’s an easy (I hope) question to start you off - what is
wrong with the sentence below?

Jill asked whether her husbands jacket was ready for collection.

Of course, the mistake is the omitted apostrophe, which should
go between the ‘d’ and the ‘s’. Husband’s is the possessive form
of the noun husband, indicating ownership of the item concerned.
But what about the sentence below?

The slimmers group meets on the first and third Thursday of
every month.


Many people would put an apostrophe after (or even within)
‘slimmers’, but this is almost certainly wrong. In this case,
slimmers is not a possessive noun but a descriptive one
(sometimes called an attributive noun), and no apostrophe is
required. ‘Slimmers’ here is a simple plural rather than a
possessive.

This confusion can easily occur when a descriptive noun ends in
the letter ‘s’. As a general guideline, when the noun in
question shows ownership, origin, authorship or
measurement/duration, it is likely to be possessive, and an
apostrophe is therefore required:

Michael’s computer
Dr Collis’s prescription
Jane Austen’s books
Ten years’ service


However, where the noun describes or identifies only, an
apostrophe is not used:

sales department
United States Army
electronics industry
skittles tournament


Sometimes it's not easy to tell which is which. For example, do
you attend a writers' conference or a writers conference? If
it's a group of writers attending a conference, you need the
plural ending, writers. If the conference actually belongs to
the writers, however, then you want the possessive form,
writers'.

A useful clue is that if you can insert another modifer between
the -s word and whatever it modifies, you're probably dealing
with a possessive:

Spurs forward John Doe scored twice in the second half.
Spurs’ new forward, John Doe, scored twice in the second half.


Another measure you can try if in doubt is to rephrase the
sentence with a noun not ending in the letter ‘s’:

Arsenal forward John Doe scored twice in the first half.
Arsenal’s centre forward, Joe Doe, scored twice in the first
half.

For the benefit of my American subscribers, Spurs and Arsenal
are English soccer teams ;-)

Finally, if there are other modifiers before the noun, these can
also help you to decide whether the noun in question is
possessive or descriptive:

Talented Spurs forward John Doe scored the first goal.
[Spurs as descriptive noun]
Spurs’ talented forward John Doe scored the first goal.
[Spurs as possessive noun]


I hope that makes this issue a bit clearer. At times, deciding
whether you have a descriptive or a possessive noun is not easy,
but if you follow these guidelines you should be right most of
the time, and if you make the odd mistake your editor will put
it right for you (maybe). New readers might also like to refer
back to my article 'What Mr Sanders Taught Me' in E-Writer Issue
One, which explains the rule about where to place apostrophes in
possessives. Click on http://www.nickdaws.co.uk/ew001.htm to go
there directly.


That's it for this issue. I hope you've enjoyed reading it and
found something that may be useful to you. E-Writer will be with
you again soon(ish).

Good writing!

Nick


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