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E-Writer
Issue #5
16 June 2004
http://www.nickdaws.co.uk
E-mail: ewriter-at-nickdaws.co.uk
"Hints, tips and tricks
for wired-up writers"

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>>> In This Issue <<<

1. Editorial
2. Article: Why Every Writer Needs a Website
3. Market Info: Miscellany
4. Article: Kwickee Bitesize update
5. Style File: Lie or Lay?


1. Editorial

Hello again. And many thanks for being a valued subscriber to E-
Writer!

I don't usually use this newsletter to blow my own trumpet
(well, not much, anyway), but I couldn't resist the opportunity
to share this e-mail with you. It came from a guy called Dave
James who recently bought a copy of my CD-based course 'Write
Any Book In Under 28 Days'. He wrote originally because he was
concerned about the time it was taking his CD to arrive (blame
the US postal service). Here's what he said:

"Thanks for the reply to my email. I did finally receive my CD.
I was getting jittery because I needed to complete a script for
my TV show. I had a script writer and another freelancer who
were writing without contact with me...the person who knew the
content for this particular script. I was the person who had the
experience and material which could tell them how I wanted the
script to be perceived. Anyway, thanks for the reply. I am
looking forward to taking over the complete script writing
assignment for my TV show. After reading the first module on
your CD I do believe I can complete my script even better than
the two I had originally contracted to write it. Whew!"

In case you're wondering, Dave produces a cable TV show (OK, I
admit I hoped he was on the writing team for Seinfeld when I
first saw his e-mail!). Anyway, the point is that he saw the
potential of some of the ideas and techniques I reveal in my
course for writing for TV. Many of these techniques - which
range from 'blueprinting' to 'power editing'- can be used for
other types of writing as well as books. So if you've not bought
my course because your writing interests lie elsewhere, dare I
suggest that you might like to think again? Whether your main
interest is playwriting, screenwriting, articles, short stories,
or something else, the chances are that many of the ideas and
techniques in 'Write Any Book in Under 28 Days' will still be
relevant to you. And even one of these ideas and techniques - as
many purchasers have testified enthusiastically - can boost
your writing productivity (and income) many times over.

And while I'm on the topic of my course, can I just mention a
couple of rather more prosaic reasons why it may be a good idea
to buy sooner rather than later? First, for US customers, my
publishers may soon be obliged to start adding US sales tax to
the price of the course (EU customers already have to pay VAT,
unfortunately). And second, for non-US customers, the dollar is
still relatively weak against the pound and other currencies.
Because the course is priced in dollars, that means you can
currently get it at a bargain price. But don't bank on the
greenback staying weak forever!

If you'd like to know more, you can read a lengthy extract from
my course at http://www.nickdaws.co.uk/writeany.htm. There is
also a link to my publisher's sales site at the bottom of that
web page. I thank you!


2. Article: Why Every Writer Needs a Website

If you're a writer and don't have your own website to advertise
yourself, you're missing out on a lot of opportunities. How
do I know? Well, I've had my own site for about seven years
now, and during that time it's brought me dozens, possibly
hundreds, of work opportunities. Here are just a few which came
my way as a result of people seeing my site...

* Hamlyn Publishing (UK) wanting me to write a couple of two-
page spreads for a proposed book.

* A retired gangster living in Ireland wanting me to help write
his memoirs.

* A local video company, wanting my help scripting a training
video.

* A US publishing house wanting me to ghost-write an exposé of
malpractice in the insurance industry.

* A UK publisher, wanting me to quote for producing a series of
city guides for publication on the Internet

* And, not least, White Cliff Computing Limited, wanting me to
write my recent CD-based course on book writing, and
subsequently two further CDs on other topics.

I didn't actually take up all of these opportunities. Sometimes
I was too busy with other projects (and I must admit the retired
gangster scared me a little ;-). However, the point is that none
of these approaches would have come my way without a website.

There are other benefits as well. If I'm applying for a new
writing project or commission, I can simply suggest that the
potential client refers to my website if they require any
further information. It saves constantly sending out weighty CVs
or résumés, and makes me look like a technologically aware, up-
to-the-minute sort of guy (this becomes more important when, as
in my case, you are no longer in the first flush of youth!). The
website also helps me keep in touch with readers of my books,
and it provides me with an additional (if small) income stream
through advertising.

OK, I hear you saying, you've sold me on the benefits of having
a website, but I'm a writer, not a tech-head. I don't know how
to create my own site, and I don't have the spare cash to hire
someone to build one for me.

Let's take the latter point first. Getting a website built for
you need not be hugely expensive. Freelance writers really don't
need whizzy, cutting-edge designs with Flash animation, online
databases, shopping trolleys, and so forth. A basic site which
showcases you and your work should be more than sufficient. Try
entering "website designer" in your favourite search engine and
you'll get hundreds of potential designers. Approach a few with
details of your requirements and see what responses you get. You
may well be pleasantly surprised by the quotes you receive.
Website design is a very competitive field - and, of course, the
designer you use can be based anywhere in the world.

However, if at all possible, I do strongly recommend that you
consider building and maintaining your own site. This has all
sorts of advantages. For one, you can update it yourself quickly
and easily, and you can also create it exactly as you wish. You
can add bits, take bits away, try out advertising, start your
own newsletter, etc. etc. This is the route I have taken, and
although my site is never going to win any awards for its
design, it suits my purposes very well.

In my time I've used various programs to create and maintain my
website, starting with a program called the CompuServe First Web
Page Designer (now, I'm sure, residing in software heaven). If I
was starting again today, however, I would definitely invest a
few bucks in the Newbie Club First Website Builder. This is a
four-volume guide to creating, writing, designing, automating,
uploading and promoting your own website, in fully illustrated
e-book format. As well as the four beautifully written e-books,
you get loads of free software, including the Super Easy Mini
Site Wizard, which will build a basic site for you in literally
minutes. Check out everything on offer in this product at
http://tinyurl.com/2syw8. I guarantee it'll blow you away.

Even if you decide to hire a professional designer to create
your site for you, the Newbie Club First Website Builder will
show you everything you need to know in order to take over
the running of your site and maintain and update it yourself.

Incidentally, the Newbie Club, which is aimed at people new to
computing rather than IT specialists, also produces a free email
newsletter packed with hints and tips for newcomers to computing
- you can sign up to it at http://tinyurl.com/2zgy2 if you wish.
Although I've been using PCs for quite a while now, I still
subscribe, and regularly pick up useful hints and tips I hadn't
been aware of before.


3. Market Info - Miscellany

Here are a few more potential markets for you. The first one
comes from the National Writers Association website (
http://nationalwritersassociation.co.uk).

A ghost-writer is required to help write an autobiography. This
mainly concerns situations which arose during WWII. Any author
wishing to apply for this contract is asked to send a complete
CV/résumé to: Writer, The National Writers Association, PO Box
831, Warrington, WA4 2WG, UK. Please enclose a stamped,
addressed envelope [presumably for those living outside the UK
an International Reply Coupon would be acceptable]. No deadline
is mentioned, unfortunately.

Sonecco Interactive is a new audiobook/spoken word publisher
based in Sheffield, UK. They are currently in the early stages
of developing their first range of general interest titles, and
are keen to receive submissions of any material that would lend
itself to the audiobook format. They are happy to consider both
previously unpublished material and work which may have been
published in a non-audio format and for which the audio rights
are available for sale. All production and marketing will be
taken care of by Sonecco, and royalties paid. Submission details
and other information can be found on the Sonecco website at
http://www.sonecco.com.

If you have a 2.1 degree or better, you might be interested in
an opportunity being offered by Degree Essays UK. They are
looking for freelance writers to research and write student
essays and dissertations. They say earnings of up to 1000 UKP
($1700) per week are possible. It might sound a bit dubious, but
they say that students are told they can only use these essays
as research material; they can't pass them off as their own.
Anyway, if you'd like to find out more, the website is
http://www.ukessays.com/writer.html

The well-known UK TV and radio production company Celador is
currently accepting scripts for TV and radio comedy shows.
Television comedy scripts should be sent to Humphrey Barclay or
Vanessa Haynes, Development Executives. Radio scripts (comedy
and light entertainment) should be sent to Liz Anstee, Head of
Radio. The address is as follows: Celador Productions Ltd, 39
Long Acre, London, WC2E 9LG, UK. They say that if your idea is
something that would suit Celador you will be contacted by their
office to arrange a meeting. See also the Celador website at
http://www.celador.co.uk

Harbinger Books is a US publisher dedicated to publishing "the
very best in horror, dark fantasy and mystery titles for the
speculative fiction market". Published and unpublished writers
are invited to submit novels from 80,000 to 100,000 words in
length. They don't publish short story collections and rarely
anthologies. Harbinger say they pay professional level advances
as defined by the Horror Writers Association and the Science
Fiction & Fantasy Writers of America. E-mail submissions should
be sent by e-mail to Submissions-at-harbingerbooks.net. Postal
submissions should be sent to: Joe Nassise, Editor-in-Chief,
Harbinger Books, c/o Revelation Press, 4560 East Hearn Road,
Phoenix, AZ 85032, USA. Don't send your manuscript straight off,
though. They would first like to see a query letter and a 1-2
page synopsis describing your novel. If this interests them,
they will then ask to see sample chapters. Allow six to eight
weeks for a reply. See also their website at www.harbingerbooks.net.

Finally, Moving Stories is a celebration of 200 years of railway
travel. Writers are invited to submit poems or stories based on
their experience of railway travel and post them on the website
http://www.moving-stories.org.uk. Some popular themes include
first encounter, leaving, off to war, a funny story, tragedy,
and coming home. Read the other stories already on the site to
gain inspiration. No payment, I'm afraid, but good practice in
stringing words together, with guaranteed publication at the
end! The closing date is 30 June 2004.


4. Kwickee Bitesize Update

Regular readers will know that I am a Group Editor (freelance,
naturally) for Kwickee Bitesize. This is a new company which
will be supplying articles, stories and so on which people can
download (for a fee) via their mobile phone or the internet.

Kwickee Bitesize is a UK operation and will be supplying
material for UK consumers initially, but anyone is welcome to
upload work, and you will receive a proportion of the fee each
time it is downloaded. You can read all about it, if you haven't
already, at http://www.kwickee.com, or in any previous E-Writer
newsletter (http://www.nickdaws.co.uk/EWarchive.htm).

The service has still not gone live to the public, though I
expect this to happen very soon now. The editing has been going
on steadily, however, so if you have submitted work you should
hear very soon (if you haven't already) whether it has been
accepted. Relatively few contributions are rejected, and if by
chance this happens to you, you should receive an e-mail
explaining the reasons and inviting you to resubmit.

I've received a few questions about Kwickee Bitesize from E-
Writer readers, so I thought it might be useful to reproduce my
answers here for the benefit of everyone else.

Q. Are people using their own names as pen-names when writing
for Kwickee Bitesize?

A. Mostly not. A few examples of names I have seen are
Skywriter, Scarlet, Bataleur and marineone. A few people have
pen-names which are presumably based on their real names, e.g.
JennyR. Very few people are using their whole names, but there
is nothing to stop you doing so if you wish.

Q. What rights are Kwickee.com purchasing?

A. They are not actually purchasing ANY rights in your work.
Kwickee Bitesize is an open-access publishing platform. Writers
are invited to submit work for publication as Kwickee Bitesizes,
and any income arising from sales is shared out - some to the
author, some to the editors, some to the telecom networks, and
so on.

Q. Can I submit work which has previously been published
elsewhere?

A. There is no objection to this in itself, although you may
need to adapt your work so that it meets the Kwickee guidelines
(length, teaser paragraph, etc.). And obviously, it must be your
own work, not somebody else's!

Q. Can I submit work which has been published on Kwickee.com
elsewhere?

A. Again, I am not aware of any objection to this, though it is
doubtful whether you could then claim that the work in question
was unpublished. You should also be aware that once your work
has been submitted to Kwickee.com, you cannot later change it or
remove it. You can, however, submit an updated version later if
you wish.

Q. For what reason might my Bitesize be rejected?

A. Only a very few reasons really. One is if it's ridiculously
short. Another is if it has clearly been copied from somewhere
else (plagiarism). And a third would be if the content is
offensive or illegal. But the editors have been told to avoid
rejecting work if at all possible. As mentioned above, Kwickee
is meant to be an open publishing platform, so rejection is very
much a last resort.

Q. What software would you recommend for writing Kwickee
Bitesizes?

A. Having written and edited quite a few Bitesizes now, I would
say write them using Microsoft Notepad (with Word Wrap switched
on) or another text editor such as TextPad (a shareware program
available from http://www.textpad.com). Save them in plain text
(.txt) format. If you use an advanced word processor such as
Word, again, save files in plain text format. Remember that you
cannot use advanced formatting features such as bold, italics,
bullet points, 'smart quotes', and so on in Bitesizes. Keep it
nice and simple, and you will have the undying gratitude of me
and my fellow editors ;-)

Q. Can you give more advice about writing adult material for
Kwickee Bitesize (and generally)?

Hmm! I'm thinking about this. There are various things I could
say, but I don't want to offend any E-Writer readers who aren't
keen on this type of writing. I may try to do a separate report
if I can find the time. For now, you might like to check out the
stories and articles on http://www.literotica.com for ideas and
inspiration. Be warned, however, that there is some very
explicit material (text and pictures) on this site.

I do hope that is some help. I don't pretend my advice is
authoritative - I simply work for Kwickee Bitesize as a
freelance editor - so if you are still uncertain on any point I
would recommend e-mailing Kwickee Bitesize themselves at
admin-at-kwickee.com. On the other hand, if you want my
unofficial take on anything related to Kwickee Bitesize, feel
free to ask me!


5. Style File: Lie or Lay?

In this feature I examine an aspect of English usage - words,
punctuation, grammar, and so on - which can cause problems for
writers. In this issue I thought I'd focus on lie and lay, two
verbs which are notoriously confusable.

Lay means 'to place something down.' It is a transitive verb,
which means it is something you do to something else.

Incorrect: Lie the book on the table.
Correct: Lay the book on the table. (The action is being done to
something else.)

Lie means 'to recline' or 'be placed'. It is an intransitive
verb, which means it does not act on anything or anyone else.

Incorrect: Lay down on the couch.
Correct: Lie down on the couch. (The action is not being done to
anything else.)

The main reason lay and lie are confusing is their past tenses.
The past tense of lay is laid, while the past tense of lie is
lay.

Incorrect: I lay it down here yesterday.
Correct: I laid it down here yesterday. (The action is being
done to something else.)

Incorrect: Last night I laid awake in bed.
Correct: Last night I lay awake in bed. (The action is not being
done to anything else.).

The past participle of lie is lain, while the past participle of
lay is, like the past tense, laid. Examples:

I could have lain in bed all day.
They have laid an average of 500 feet of pipeline a day.

Finally, the present participle of lie is lying, while the
present participle of lay is laying. Examples:

I am lying on the beach today.
They are laying the carpet as I speak.

Confusion between these verbs is widespread, even among those
who (arguably) should know better. For example, on the six
o'clock news a BBC journalist recently announced that the
suspect in a criminal case was believed to be 'laying low' with
relatives. And the scriptwriters of popular TV soap operas
regularly have their characters saying lay instead of lie, laid
instead of lain, presumably because they feel that this is more
life-like.

In time, it is quite likely that lay will become accepted as an
intransitive verb which is interchangeable with lie, and the
past participle lain will become obsolete. You may or may not
feel that this will be a loss to the English language. Of
course, I couldn't possibly comment...

For now, though, it's still important for writers to get these
verbs right. The only exception might be when writing dialogue
in a story or screenplay. So many people now say lay instead of
lie, laying instead of lying, that I can understand why writers
feel obliged to make their characters do likewise. Be aware if
you do this, however, that the strange noise you hear in the
background when the actors are speaking your words will probably
be me grinding my teeth!


That's it for this issue. I should just mention that I will
be appearing as a panelist at the Purple Patch Poetry Convention
at the Barlow Theatre, Langley, Sandwell, on Sunday 20 June at
12.30pm. The topic for discussion is 'Digital publishing: finger
on the button or poke in the eye?' Do come and say hello to me
afterwards if you happen to be there!

I hope you've enjoyed reading this issue and found something
that may be of use to you. E-Writer will be with you again in
the next week or two (probably).

Good writing!

Nick


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